Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Bowling Pins are the natural enemy of bowlers.

A top professional player leaves a solid ten pin....cut to the pin deck, the pins are mumbling about they just cannot take this anymore.  Put out the message to the Lead Head Pin.

A (noted professional player) goes to launch a ball at a solid 10 pin, and turns around and 10 giant pins charge and tackle him.

A series of newspaper, television and various media news clips about top bowling professionals disappearing. Kidnapped ? ...  Whereabouts unknown.

Cut to a rumbling noise in a dark home.( A noted player) rubs his eyes as his bedroom door opens.  10 pin shaped silhouettes enter and rumble clumsily across the room and struggle to get the player into a duffle bag .   They drag or carry the bag, noisily to an old beat up vehicle, bouncing and clanging into the night....

Each time the players are abducted, they are thrown into a store room at  The  Old Abandoned Center.

This kidnapping happens in various ways til there are ten players missing.   ( show glimpes of a ten pin triangle filling up)

The lead head laughing , is about to throw a ball at the ten players standing in the triangle.

Just before he lets go, the door flies open, and the Top Senior tour players are here to save the day......



I hope you enjoyed this story.  I have many ways I can present it. It would make a great television or print series , or comic book for the youth bowlers.   I can continue this series for as long as needed.

Thank you for your time, Mark Burkenbine.

This work is owned by Mark Burkenbine and is copyright as of publication on September 4, 2013. The work is time stamped.  No unauthorized reproduction allowed.  Contact Mark Burkenbine at mburkenbine@gmail.com to purchase rights to this material.

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